Bien, Inc., is considering launching an internship program, and Nathan Weintraub, manager of Human Resources, seeks information

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Bien, Inc., is considering launching an internship program, and Nathan Weintraub, manager of Human Resources, seeks information from members of the management team.

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Study the first draft of his hastily written message and list at least five weaknesses. Then revise it to create a concise, clear message. Consider patterning your revision on Figure 5.1 in this chapter.


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Essentials Of Business Communication

ISBN: 9781337386494

11th Edition

Authors: Mary Ellen Guffey, Dana Loewy

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