The following message from Veronica Dunaway, the vice president of human relations, seeks to help supervisors and

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The following message from Veronica Dunaway, the vice president of human relations, seeks to help supervisors and managers write safe and helpful performance reviews.

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Analyze the vice president’s message. List at least five weaknesses. Pay special attention to its tone. Your instructor may ask you to revise the e-mail so that it reflects some of the writing techniques you learned in this chapter. How can you make this e-mail more courteous, positive, concise, precise, and audience oriented? Your instructor may ask you to revise this message as a collaboration project using Google Docs or Word’s Track Changes and Comment features.

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Essentials Of Business Communication

ISBN: 9781337386494

11th Edition

Authors: Mary Ellen Guffey, Dana Loewy

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