Evaluate the following drafts. What parts should be omitted? What needs to be changed or added? What parts would benefit from specific supporting details?

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1. Dear_ There is more to a buyer's job than buying the merchandise. And a clothing buyer in particular has much to consider. Even though something may be in style, customers may not want to buy it. Buyers should therefore be aware of what customers want and how much they are willing to pay. In the buying field, request letters, thank-you letters, and persuasive letters are fre- quently written. My interest in the retail field inspired me to read Forever 21's annual report. I saw that a new store is being built. An interview would give us a chance to discuss how I could contribute to this new store. Please call me to schedule an interview. Sincerely,