The following rsum was submitted in response to an ad describing the following duties: CAM Technician to

The following résumé was submitted in response to an ad describing the following duties: “CAM Technician to work with other technicians and manage some GIS and mapping projects. Also, perform updating of the GIS database. Experience required.” In a brief memo to your instructor, describe how effective the résumé is. What are some of its problems?

Kenneth Bradley 530 Maplegrove Bozeman, Mont. 59715 (406)-484-2916 Objective Entry-level position as a CAM Technician. I am also interested in staying with the company until after graduation, possibly moving into a position as a Mechanical Engineer. Education Enrolled at Montana State University August 2011- Present Employment Fred Meyer 65520 Chinden Garden City, MT (208)-323-7030 Janitor- 7/10-6/11 Responsible for cleaning the entire store, as well as equipment maintenance and floor maintenance and repair. Assistant Janitorial Manager- 6/11-9/11 Responsible for cleaning the entire store, equipment maintenance, floor maintenance and repair, scheduling, and managing personnel Head of Freight- 9/11-Present In charge of breaking down all new freight, stocking shelves, cleaning the stock room, and managing personnel Montana State University Bozeman, MT Teachers Aide ME 120- 1/10-5/10 Teachers Aide ME 120 In charge of keeping students in line and answering any questions related to drafting. References Timothy Rayburn Janitorial Manager (406)-555-8571 Eduardo Perez Coworker (406)-555-2032