A Journal Entries Notes Rules, Types of Accounts, Imp.Terms, Formats Dear Students, Launch Meeting-Zoom Please revise the following sentences to improve you-attitude and positive emphasis. Eliminate any awkward phrasing. In some cases you may need to add information to revise the sentence effectively. 1. You will be happy to know that the cost of tuition will not rise next year. 2. Please notify HR of your bank change as soon as possible to prevent a disruption of your direct deposit. 3. You will be happy to hear that our cell phone plan does not charge you for incoming calls. 4. If you mailed a check with your order, as you claim, we failed to receive it. 5. The job sounds perfect for me. Explain the source of bias in the following sentences and and revise for inclusivity. 1. Mr. Brady, Mr. Barnes and the new intern, Jodi, will represent our company at the job fair. 2. I would prefer if you hired a female secretary; women are typically friendlier than men. 3. Please do not use the side elevator as it is reserved for the people who cannot walk. 4. Because older customers tend to be really picky, we will need to give a lot of details in our adds. 5. Although he is blind, Mr. Morris is an excellent group leader. All the best! Megha Gaur. a Grammar-W2022 CMM230-20