Assignment 2.3

Prompt:

Edit the following sentences to eliminate wordy and redundant phrases and emphasize main ideas.

1. In many ways students must learn to teach themselves to be successful.
2. American automobiles, once threatened by imports from Japan and other countries, are entering and competing in the global car market.
3. Many Illnesses and many diseases can be prevented when people eat a proper diet, do some exercise, and control their consumption of alcohol.
4. In my personal opinion, the calculus course is too tough for the majority of freshmen students, which leads them to get frustrated and eventually quit college.
5. The final course exams were distributed by the professor after he gave a brief introduction.

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