Below are examples of poorly delivered feedback given to employees. Rewrite them so they

are not so poorly written. $(5$ marks$)$

$1.$ Your sales numbers are on the rise, which is great, but we$$ve noticed you tend to avoid collaborating

with your coworkers. That said, you are also very punctual.

$2.$ Your presentations are very confusing. We need to write them better.

$3.$ You are too abrupt during your phone calls with clients. We need you to change.

$4.$ You are usually late for meetings. When you are late for meetings you are disrespecting me and causing me to feel stress.

$5.$ I have noticed that your lunch breaks are fifteen minutes longer than everybody else$$s$.$ This to me

shows laziness on your part.