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For this article the EFQM model will be applied to a distinguished household company ("Proctor & Gamble") that manufactures top brands of soaps, cleansers, and various household goods. This company first was established in the year 1837 by a British citizen name William Proctor, both him and James Gamble (an Irish soap maker) immigrated to the United States. The EFQM model criterion 4 (Partnership & Resources) and criterion (Process, Products & Services) will be applied to Proctor & Gamble business structure. The EFQM model tends to address and support human rights within the business mediums, inspiring organizations to practice and implement 10 guided principles regarding social responsibilities across the globe. These guided values covered by the EFQM model strongly are directed on areas on human rights, bribery, corruption and human forced labour. Proctor & Gamble seeks to ensure that its products are of good quality, each organization should ensure that its products are also being produced in a sustainable manner. Essentially all organizations looking for its business to excel its supply chain should employ these EFQM principles. This intern would improve its supply chain efficiency hence improving customer satisfaction, decrease retention, improve capability, and ensure customers remain loyal and satisfied. (Dudovskiy, 2012)