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Peacekeepers are sent to countries that need assistance. Their purpose is to maintain stability in a developing or war-torn region. Peacekeepers, unlike the military, lack enough ammunition supplies; hence they only act as negotiators and mediators. After analyzing and reflecting on several articles, I realized that restoring global harmony and security via peacekeeping is extremely difficult because essential objectives must be dealt with before a civil society is initiated.

Peacekeepers are often posted in post-conflict situations where violence and aggression are taking place. As a result, peacekeeping attempts to resolve the power of war viciousness, protect ordinary civilians and overpower fighting dispersion. The task force's job as a peacekeeper is not to take sides but to maintain neutrality within the opposing parties. In the article "Why Peacekeeping Fails," Dennis Jett, a professor of international affairs at Penn State University, states, "The fundamental problem is that there is no peace to keep, and U.N. forces are incapable of imposing one because they are peacekeepers and not war-fighters." Before the peacekeeper starts their intervention, the major parties in the conflict must offer their permission for peacekeepers to participate. Furthermore, in the article "Do U.N. peacekeepers do more harm than good?" a Central African Republic peacekeeper told Al Jazeera that his battalion had been instructed not to talk or engage with the local population. By doing this, he stated, "It just creates the possibilities for the wrong things to happen. The next thing you know, we are accused of something." Interaction with the local population is often discouraged. When it does occur, it is often in the form of peacekeepers parading in their armoured vehicles and blue helmets, which is something that only furthers the dehumanization of the host population."

The Indonesia East Timor War is an example of where peacekeeping was deployed. Indonesia occupied East Timor in 1975, which is situated in Southeast Asia. A war broke out, resulting in many deaths and the eviction of 500,000 people from their residences. The Indonesians invaded East Timor because the new government gave East Timor a vote on their countries future, and the vote went overwhelmingly in favour of independence. Following the announcement of the result, pro-Indonesian militias launched a violent campaign. The United Nations Security Council (UNSC) criticized the invasion a few months later, calling on Indonesia to withdraw its military forces from East Timor because the Indonesians' aggression breached international law and the right to self-determination. However, the Indonesian government was unable to curb their citizens' aggression, prompting Australia to mobilize and lead the International Force East Timor (INTERFET), which worked alongside the U.N. in East Timor. INTERFET began landing in East Timor on September 12, 1999, with over 5,500 employees. The landing of INTERFET led to the withdrawal of pro-Indonesian rebels and the Indonesian government's security forces, army, and politicians. Despite the departure of pro-Indonesian rebels and Indonesian Government security forces, the United Nations peacekeeping mission in East Timor was disappointing because the U.N. did not meet the target. The United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) was created to provide security and maintain law and order throughout the territory of East Timor by: establishing an effective administration, assisting in the development of civil and social services, making sure the coordination and supply of humanitarian assistance, rehabilitation and development assistance, support capacity-building for self-government, helping in the initiation of conditions for stable growth. Despite the UNTAET's primary goals, East Timor remained with several problems, including extreme poverty, unemployment, a lack of economic growth, police brutality, and poor leadership. "In the article "Peacekeepers leave East Timor," a Canadian Forces document talking about East Timor said, "The rise of street gangs in urban areas, as well as labour unrest in Dili, indicates that the honeymoon is over and the place is going to hell in a handbasket." Many people accused the U.N. administration of being too slow to ready the countries' independence and get a large-scale reconstruction underway. This led to violence flaring up again in 2006, forcing Australia, Indonesia, and Portugal to deploy forces, restoring order.

In conclusion, establishing global harmony and security through peacekeeping is a daunting task that is no guarantee. The parties concerned have to compromise on big decisions that can have a long-term effect which has proven to cause havoc. Peacekeeping did not successfully bring an end to East Timor's violence because many Indonesians were defiant and refused to stop protesting East Timor's independence. Despite the establishment of the INTERFET and UNTAET, they didn't meet any of the objectives they had set, leaving East Timor as unstable today as before the U.N.'s assistance.