Dr. Toosi said "The BUS502 course is designed to introduce our graduate adult learners to a rigorous introduction about how to best do marketing research; communicate in writing, and professionally present before a group. I have asked Professor Schaumann to engage you in interactive discussions throughout to help you to excel. Its' important that each graduate adult learner capitalize on this learning opportunity".

What corrections did you make and why? What's the rule that supports EACH of the edit recommendations that you made?