For each of the following sentences, choose the option that makes the message more reader oriented.

We$$d like to thank you for ordering the new Premio computer.

No change necessary.

We have received your order.

Thank you for your order.

We$$ve provided the confirmation number above so we can help you track your shipment.

We can provide you with tracking information on your shipment if you use the confirmation number above.

Track the shipment of your new Premio computer using confirmation number $840$xs$83.$

No change necessary.

We$$d be happy to discuss the features of your new computer. Call us at $(555)555-5555,$ or e$-$mail us at customerservice@premio.com.

Our customer service staff is standing by to answer your questions about Premio features. Contact us at $(555)555-5555$ or customerservice@premio.com

If you have any questions about the features of your new computer, our customer service staff is available to help you by phone at $(555)555-5555$ or by e$-$mail at customerservice@premio.com.

No change necessary.

Which of the following sentences is the most bias free?

Mr$.$ Maxwell, who is handicapped, is always on time.

Mr$.$ Maxwell is always on time.

Mr$.$ Maxwell, who is wheelchair bound, is always on time.

Which sentences are expressed using positive language? Check all that apply.

You won$$t be hired until the contract has been signed.

Without your signature, your contract won$$t be processed.

We cannot process your contract without your signature.

We can expedite the contract once it$$s been signed.

Please sign the contract so it can be processed.

Your contract will be processed once it$$s been signed.

Which is the most clear and precise sentence explaining the investigation of a harassment charge?

We should investigate Ms$.$ Tung$$s harassment charges before speaking to Mr$.$ Stockton.

Ms$.$ Tung is making harassment charges, and I believe we should investigate the charges before we even speak to Mr$.$ Stockton.

Before we speak to Mr$.$ Stockton, it$$s important for us to fully investigate the harassment charges Ms$.$ Tung is making.

Which is the most clear and precise sentence explaining where performance evaluations should be sent?

Send copies of performance evaluations to LaShonda Eastman, who is the Director of Human Resources, before they are filed.

Performance evaluations are subject to review by LaShonda Eastman prior to filing of said performance evaluations.

Please send copies of performance evaluations to LaShonda Eastman, Human Resources Director, for review before filing.