Good afternoon I done my assessment but I make some mistake can somebody help me to change the all mistake pls ?This is business plan which I have always problem and I need help to change this all things thx.

1) The company is called Kama Handmade Bakery. Kamila Kimel will be the owner of the company. The company's address will be 49 Gallowtree Gate, Leicester, Leicestershire, England 2) The company will be a single proprietorship under the law. 3) Kama Handmade Bakery will be a bakery that specialises in cakes, bread, baking rolls and special cupcakes. 4) The size of the current market in UK bakeries of cakes and cupcakes is valued at E3.9 billion as well as being a significant part of a country's food economy. Currently, overall volume is little over 4 billion units, which equates to over 11 million packs sold each day. The revenue for Kama Handmade Bakery will be E83,000.00. 5) The target market for Kama Handmade Bakery will be people who live in the Leicester area, UK. 6) The long-term aim for Kama Handmade Bakery is to become the leading bakery in Leicestershire, UK. 7) The sources of finance for Kama Handmade Bakery will be Kamila Kimel savings, a business loan, and revenue from the business. 8) Kamila Kimel all savings, a business loan, and sales earnings will all be used to fund Kama Handmade Bakery. Valid strategy but lacks depth and breadth 9)Competitors of Kama Handmade Bakery will probably attempt to undercut her costs and snatch her clients. By supplying a loyalty programme and giving top-notch customer service, Kamila will overcome this. Why have you included the above when its in more detail below? The name of my business is Kama handmade Bakery. The business will be owned by my Kamila Kimel. The address of my business will be 49 Gallowtree Gate, Leicester, Leicestershire, England. My company will be a single proprietorship under the law. This indicates that I will own and run the company on my one, My bakery makes handmade cakes and cupcakes and much more. Kama handmade Bakery will be the place to go. Cakes, the real best bread, baking rolls and lovely handmade cupcakes will be available for purchase at my shop. Cookies and pies will also be available in my bakery. The present market for cakes and cupcakes inGE 3 Text Comment. Valid strategy but lacks depth and breadth Text Comment. Why have you included the above when its in more detail below? Text Comment. What are the pros and cons of this, Lacks depth AGE 4 Text Comment. According to what research Text Comment. What research indicates that this is a valid form of promotion to use? Text Comment. Valid form of promotion Text Comment. One valid aim Text Comment. Aims lacks depth. No SMART objectives have been discussed Text Comment. Order of words Text Comment. No analysis of selected method. According to what research bakeries is estimated at E3.9 billion so it is quite an important element of a country's food economy. Currently, total volume is somewhat more than 4 billion units, which translates to more than 11 million packs sold each day. The revenue for my Kama handmade Bakery will be E83,000.00. As a result, the cake and cupcake industry is enormous, and Kama handmade Bakery can profitably compete in it. Despite this, Kama handmade Bakery will only hold a tiny percentage of the overall market. Read More Cakes and cupcakes may be found elsewhere, since there are numerous bakeries and companies that specialise in them. Karna handmade Bakery's target market will be residents of Leicester, UK. To attract consumers, the bakery will promote in local HeWSpapers aka of fine lies 605R thePopeHing day Will be free handmade cupcakes and lovely cake, as well as via word-of-mouth marketing. Kama handmade Bakery will separate itself from the competition by offering a loyalty programme to encourage consumers to retuth ahid exceptional customer service. Kama handmade Bakery's long-term goal is to become the premier bakery in Lei one valid a Leicester , UK. This means Kama handmade Bakery will be the go-to spot in Leicester for handmade cakes and cupcakes. I will need to keep my bakery filled with fresh and really handmade delectable cakes and cupcakes in order to do this. I will also need to deliver excellent customer service in order for my clients to return to my best handmade bakery.Kama Aims lacks depth. No SMART handmade Bakery's my short-term business goals are to turn a profit in the first year, Brow objectives have the company in the second year, and add a second site in the third year. been discussed I will need to earn enough money to cover my expenditures in order to turn a profit in the first year, also I will need to add other items or services to develop my company in the second year, and I need a solid client base and healthy cash flow to create a second site in the third year. Order of words My all savings, a business loan, and earnings from the company will all be used to fund my Kama handmade Bakery. My funds will be utilised as the company's first investment, My why ? next will get a business loan to fund the company's development. The revenue from my business will be utilised to repay the debt.No analysis of selected method Kama handmade Bakery's marketing strategy will involve newspaper and internet Repeated above advertising, as well as word-of-mouth marketing and the best open day free handmade cupcakes and cakes I will try to do a lot of promotion at the beginning to attract customers, also once a months I will do on social media contests for sharing and like the page, tagging at least 3 friends once a month will win a f20 voucher to spend in our Kama handmade bakery, also I will need to choose the best combination of marketing channels to reach the Valid form of target market of individuals living in Leicester, UK. I need also take into account the expenseromotion, No of each channel, as well as its reach and efficacy. other element of marketing mix The only thing I have to watch out for is that the quality of my handmade bread, cake, and discussed cupcakes never deteriorates, and then I won't have to worry about anything. I believe that my business plan is well thought out to start as best as possible, and with time I will returnthe entire contribution that I invested in this bakery if the products are of the highest quality and I am able to gain quite a few trusted customers quickly by hand. After seeing that the quality hasn't changed and is consistently high, the customer may be willing to spend extra to ensure that the product continues to meet their standards. Reference list: https://www.leicestermercury.co.ukews/business/family-owned-leicester-bakery-creates- 2881581 BR - Reference guide Check https://www.fob.uk.com/about-the-bread-industry/ https://www.gov.uk/search/research-and- statistics?content_store_document_type=upcoming_statistics