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RESEARCH TITLE: The differential uses and moderating variables in social media in relation to the level of feelings of inferiority among senior highschool students (In layman's term, social media usage and inferiority complex among senior highschool students)

INTRODUCTION

(This first paragraph should be more catchy, unique, and interesting; may you provide more citations from 2012-2022) In the last ten years, social media use has grown significantly. There are over 3.5 billion active social media users worldwide, or about 45% of the world's population, according to a 2019 survey (We are social, 2019). A "platform for user-generated content and interaction," according to the definition of social media (Dwyer, 2019, p. 4). Social media networks like Facebook, Instagram, Snapchat, and Twitter come in many different varieties. Numerous studies on the effects of social media have been undertaken as a result of the rise in social media usage.

(This second paragraph should contain more definition of terms related fo the research title/topic; my yo provide more citations from 2012-2022) Social networking can cause users to feel inferior or inadequate, which is one of its impacts. According to a Straits Times investigation, young individuals who use social media may experience emotions of inferiority or inadequacy (The Straits Times, 2017). Another Dwyer study indicated that using social media is linked to sentiments of loneliness and inferiority (Dwyer, 2019).

(Similar to the second paragraph, this third paragraph should contain more definition of terms related fo the research title/topic) There are numerous reasons why using social media could make someone feel inadequate or inferior. Social media users may compare themselves to others on the platform, for example. According to a Buote study, people who use social media frequently compare themselves to others, which can cause them to feel inadequate or inferior (Buote, 2016). Another explanation is that social media users frequently see romanticized depictions of other people. Since users compare themselves to these idealized images, exposure to them might generate emotions of inferiority or inadequacy (Dwyer, 2019).

(This fourth paragraph should cover the gaps of the study/problem of the study) There is research that suggests social media use can have good consequences, despite the fact that it might cause feelings of inferiority or inadequacy. For instance, Kuss and Griffiths' study revealed that social media use can boost one's sense of self and perception of one's body (Kuss & Griffiths, 2012). In addition, Kim's research revealed that using social media can enhance social abilities and social support.

(This last paragraph should cover the rationale and locale of the study) There hasn't been much research on how diverse social media usage and moderating factors affect senior high school students' perceptions of inferiority. The goal of this study is to examine how diverse social media usage patterns and moderating factors relate to senior high school students' perceptions of their own inadequacy. Understanding the consequences of social media use on senior high school students will require knowledge from this study. (May you please add more paragraphs that cover the rationale and locale of the study)

REFERENCES:

Social media usage and inferiority complex

https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/social-media-use-can-trigger-feelings-of-inferiority-or-inadequacy-among-young-experts https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/2056305120912488

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35338206/

https://morungexpress.com/the-danger-of-social-media-induced-inferiority-complex 0

The differential uses and moderating variables in social media in relation to the level of feelings of inferiority among senior highschool students

https://escholarship.org/content/qt1h97773d/qt1h97773d_noSplash_6e2e0bfa87a874654e3824f436cfe623.pdf https://www.researchgate.net/publication/340499094_The_association_between_self-esteem_and_dimensions_and_classes_of_cross-platform_social_media_use_in_a_sample_of_emerging_adults_-_Evidence_from_regression_and_latent_class_analyses

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2451958821000695