help me with good ideas of a thesis statement: the purpose of an HIM manager to prevent common errors in the organization.

I got the following: drug safety, medical mistakes, healthcare acquired conditions, information systems constraints, and fragmented delivery systems are just some of the many issues affecting the healthcare quality and safety in the United States.Which is in my introduction I got it from this link https://bok.ahima.org/doc?oid=104841

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