his discussion will allow you to see other answers only after you have answered initially. That's because you have to do the work!

These unfortunately come from real documents that led the company the writer worked for to court. Let's not talk about what happened to the writer's career.

Fix the Wordiness!

Here's how:

Circle the prepositional phrases. Then ask yourself what each phrase intends to do. If the intent isn't clear, cut it.

Circle the "to be" verb forms: is, are, was, were, will be, been, etc.

With each" to be" verb, check to see if it is passive. If so, make it active. If it isn't, see if you can find a stronger verboften in the sentenceto replace the "to be" verb.

Break up the sentences for easier reading.

Now ask what in the world the ideas mean. Would you say this sentence? If so, why? If not, what would you say instead? Write that down.

As we all know and deal with coaches - once the green light to "Go" flashes they go regardless of what anyone says. They will expect that a plan is already in-place. As you have seen from yesterday's news the NCAA is permitting college athletics to begin their Phase 1 as of June 1st. In the normal world of pre-Covid the high schools could begin summer workouts as of June 1st or 7 days after their school system ended their regular school year - meaning most would begin by around June 10th or so.

During our investigation, it was discovered that an abandoned shipment that had been sent via British Air and that was transferred from Kennedy airport to a facility in Atlanta, which, when scanned, revealed that it was ordered without a purchase order and subsequently was unable to be identified as property of a department.