https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KpLHr7orGifW1azEN3Jtr9927OH1DlzkI1U1qoSe330/edit?usp=sharing

Please click on this link and respond the questions below:

1. How well does the student-writer support his thesis throughout the paper? What paragraphs best support the thesis? Which parts of the paper do not relate to the thesis as clearly?

2. Which paragraph(s) demonstrates the best balance of the student-writer's summary of Fisher's speech and analysis of Fisher's rhetorical strategies? Be sure you recognize the difference between summary and analysis.

3. Which paragraph needs more analysis? What would you include in that paragraph to strengthen the analysis and fulfill the assignment's expectations?

4. Overall, what is the biggest strength in the essay? What is the student-writer doing well?

5. What is the biggest area for improvement? If you were grading this paper, what advice would you offer the student-writer for improving the essay?