I am not asking you to tell me if you liked the content of the story but rather look at it from a videography standpoint. Pay attention to the follwing:

-shot framing and composition, were the shots well composed? how so?

-Notice the use of ambient or natural sound in the story, how does that help the story or is it a distraction.

-Are the shots visually appealing, are they in focus with good white balances and are they steady? 

-Is there anything that you would have done different if you were filming one of these stories?

 

 

UMASS Glassblower -https://youtu.be/XtdOLLplD84

North Hadley Village Hall- https://connectingpoint.nepm.org/north-hadley-village-hall-worth-preserving/