i need a second opinion on if my writing sufficiently answers my class discussion. i was supposed to write a 2ph memo on a statement made about "the managers of a company should use the same info as shareholders. when managers use the same info to guide their internal operations as shareholders use in evaluating their investments, the managers will be aligned with the stockholders profit obj."

Subject: Statement about the use of information between managers and shareholders. I feel compelled to write to you regarding a statement you made at our recent finance meeting. You stated, "The managers of a company should use the same information as the shareholders of the firm. When managers use the same information to guide their internal operations as shareholders use in evaluating their investments, the managers will be aligned with the stockholders' profit objectives." I found issue with this statement for a few reasons. Managers and shareholders do share the same company financial statements to track company profits. And, while both parties share an interest in company profits they have different ideals on what it takes to keep the inf company profitable. pio D Managers take additional information into considerstion like long term health of the company, and employee moral. They prioritize the ability to keep people employed, first because they themselves are company employees and second because they understand happy employees aid in company profit. Shareholders, on the other hand, are more likely to cut employees if it helps their bottom line. They're preference is often on figures over the people their decisions affect. If managers operated under the same information as shareholders, the company figures, we as a company would struggle for ignoring the human component