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What are ways in which the state can encourage Corporate Social Responsibility ?1

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Private companies are currently companies that are not owned by the government in Canada. Social stability means an absence of social unrest or violence. Private enterprises can contribute in various ways to the maintenance of social stability, notably by contributing to wealth. Wealth is a material attribute, a realization of the things around us (goods and services) that we have access to. wealth is the responsibility of future entrepreneurs but also the formula for social stability. The gross domestic product (GDP) and the Gini coefficient are the formula for social stability. Private enterprise has a social responsibility to maintain the stability of society. This can be done in many ways, such as making jobs, providing essential goods and services, and innovating to create new products and services that improve our quality of life. Private Companies play a key role in society and must be aware of their impact on social stability, we will talk in particular about ethics. The most stable societies are those with a strong middle class. The middle class is essential to social stability because it has the most to lose if society were to collapse. They also have the most to gain from a stable society, so they have a vested interest in maintaining stability. Private businesses can help create and sustain a strong middle class by creating high and fair wage jobs, providing essential goods and services, and investing in innovation with government support. Moreover, innovation is essential to economic growth and therefore to social stability. Without innovation, our standard of living would stagnate and eventually decline.

Private companies play a key role in innovation, because they are the ones who invest in research and development and who market new products and services. It is enough to take into account all the objects around us, making our life easier by facilitating access to our needs and desires. In conclusion, private enterprises can make a significant contribution to maintaining social stability. By providing employment opportunities, financing social protection programs and helping to create and maintain a stable economy through the contribution to wealth, private companies can play a vital role in guaranteeing the cohesion and stability of a society

This is how the answer should be

Offers a clear position on the issue from the first or second sentence, Provides a brief definition of key concepts relevant to the answer, Provideds three to four response items. An element is an idea that one manages to include as a point of support for one's position. Ensures a logical order between elements, supported by clear and precise language (directional in reading and exact in its use of terms). And Conclude with one or two sentences that recall the link that must be seen between the elements of the answers and the position adopted