I submitted an essay and I received a low grade. I need to REVISE this essay and it will need to sent to Turnitin. I have included a copy of the original essay and the requirements

let me know if you have any questions. Proper grammar, and REFERENCES and Process maps must be included

Please use excellent grammar, punctuation and RESOURCES. This is my 2 nd attempt to submit a good paper I have included my original essay. Feel free to ADD to this essay, but refer to the rubric below. A more detailed processing map is needed for manufacturing AND service Select two companies of interest, one manufacturing company (e.g., a shoe company) and one service company (e.g., a technical support company). Provide a brief summary of each company including compelling evidence illustrating the company is either a manufacturing or a service company. Avoid selecting a company that could be arguably both. Manufacturing Research the manufacturing process for the selected company. Create a manufacturing process map. Explain the elements of infrastructure for the manufacturing company using flow charts and be sure to provide a key. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Service Research the service process for the selected company. Create a service process map. Explain the elements of infrastructure for the service company using flow charts and be sure to provide a key. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Summary Provide a 750-1,000-word summary describing the differences and similarities between manufacturing and service environments. For each company, identify if customerintroduced variability is available. If not, how would you implement flexibility for customerintroduced variability? How will a deep understanding of both manufacturing and service environments help you in your future or current career? Provide an example. Prepare this assignment according to the guidelines found in the APA Style Guide, located in the Student Success Center. An abstract is not required. This assignment uses a rubric. Please review the rubric prior to beginning the assignment to become familiar with the expectations for successful completion. You are required to submit this assignment to Turnitin. Please refer to the directions in the Student Success Center. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Create a service process map. Should be a sequence of specific activities defined by the appropriate verb. As is, the process is more like a framework. Explain the elements of infrastructure for the service company using flow charts and be sure to provide a key. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Describe the differences and similarities between manufacturing and service environments. For each company, identify if customer-introduced variability is available. If not, how would you implement flexibility for customer-introduced variability? How will a deep understanding of both manufacturing and service environments help you in your future or current career? Provide an example. Prepare this assignment according to the guidelines found in the APA Style Guide Manufacturing and Service Process Maps 2 1 Less than Unsatisfactory Satisfactory 0.00% 75.00% 70.0 %Content 25.0 %Manufacturing Process Map The manufacturing process map is absent, inappropriate, or irrelevant. Supporting sources are not present. 25.0 %Service Process Map he service process map is absent, inappropriate, or irrelevant. Supporting sources are not present. 20.0 %Summary A summary describing the differences and similarities between manufacturing and service environments is absent, inappropriate, or The manufacturing process map makes weak connections with several gaps. Some supporting sources are present but do not show an understanding of the content. 3 Satisfactory 80.00% The manufacturing process map makes connections at a cursory level and contains minimal gaps. Supporting sources show some understanding of the content. 4 Good 90.00% The manufacturing process map makes meaningful connections, contains no gaps, and is clear and integrated. Supporting sources illustrate an understanding of the content. The service The service The service process map process map process map makes weak makes makes connections connections at meaningful with several a cursory level connections, gaps. Some and contains contains no supporting minimal gaps. gaps, and is sources are Supporting clear and present but do sources show integrated. not show an some Supporting understanding understanding sources of the content. of the content. illustrate an understanding of the content. A summary A summary A summary describing the describing the describing the differences anddifferences and differences and similarities similarities similarities between between between manufacturing manufacturing manufacturing and service and service and service environments environments environments process is process is process is clear weak or provided but at and integrated. 5 Excellent 100.00% The manufacturing process map makes meaningful connections, contains no gaps, and is thorough and well integrated. Supporting sources illustrate a deep understanding of the content. The service process map makes meaningful connections, contains no gaps, and is thorough and well integrated. Supporting sources illustrate a deep understanding of the content. A summary describing the differences and similarities between manufacturing and service environments process thorough and well irrelevant. 20.0 %Organization and Effectiveness 7.0 %Thesis Paper lacks any Development and discernible Purpose overall purpose or organizing claim. 20.0 %Organization and Effectiveness 8.0 %Argument Statement of Logic and purpose is not Construction justified by the conclusion. The conclusion does not support the claim made. Argument is incoherent and uses no credible sources. marginal with a cursory level. An example is gaps in An example is provided that presentation. provided. illustrates an An example is understanding not provided. of the content. integrated. An example is provided that illustrates a deep understanding of the content. Thesis is Thesis is insufficiently apparent and developed or appropriate to vague. Purposepurpose. is not clear. Thesis is comprehensive and contains the essence of the paper. Thesis statement makes the purpose of the paper clear. Sufficient justification of claims is lacking. Argument lacks consistent unity. There are obvious flaws in the logic. Some sources have questionable credibility. Thesis is clear and forecasts the development of the paper. Thesis is descriptive and reflective of the arguments and appropriate to the purpose. Argument is Argument orderly, but shows logical may have a progressions. few Techniques of inconsistencies.argumentation The argument are evident. presents There is a minimal smooth justification of progression of claims. claims from Argument introduction to logically, but conclusion. not thoroughly, Most sources supports the are purpose. authoritative. Sources used are credible. Introduction and conclusion bracket the thesis. 20.0 %Organization and Effectiveness 5.0 %Mechanics Surface errors Frequent and Some of Writing are pervasive repetitive mechanical (includes spelling, enough that they mechanical errors or typos punctuation, impede errors distract are present, grammar, communication the reader. but they are language use) of meaning. Inconsistencies not overly Inappropriate in language distracting to word choice or choice the reader. sentence (register) or Correct and construction is word choice varied used. are present. sentence Sentence structure and structure is audiencecorrect but not appropriate Clear and convincing argument that presents a persuasive claim in a distinctive and compelling manner. All sources are authoritative. Prose is largely Writer is clearly free of in command of mechanical standard, errors, although written, a few may be academic present. The English. writer uses a variety of effective sentence structures and figures of speech. varied. 10.0 %Format 5.0 %Paper Format (use of appropriate style for the major and assignment) Template is not used appropriately or documentation format is rarely followed correctly. language are employed. Appropriate Appropriate template is template is used, but someused. elements are Formatting is missing or correct, mistaken. A although some lack of control minor errors with formatting may be is apparent. present. 5.0 Sources are not Documentation Sources are %Documentation documented. of sources is documented, of Sources inconsistent or as appropriate (citations, incorrect, as to assignment footnotes, appropriate to and style, references, assignment although some bibliography, etc., and style, with formatting as appropriate to numerous errors may be assignment and formatting present. style) errors. 100 %Total Weightage Appropriate All format template is fully elements are used. There are correct. virtually no errors in formatting style. Sources are Sources are documented, as completely and appropriate to correctly assignment and documented, as style, and appropriate to format is mostly assignment and correct. style, and format is free of error. Please use excellent grammar, punctuation and RESOURCES. This is my 2 nd attempt to submit a good paper Select two companies of interest, one manufacturing company (e.g., a shoe company) and one service company (e.g., a technical support company). Provide a brief summary of each company including compelling evidence illustrating the company is either a manufacturing or a service company. Avoid selecting a company that could be arguably both. Manufacturing Research the manufacturing process for the selected company. Create a manufacturing process map. Explain the elements of infrastructure for the manufacturing company using flow charts and be sure to provide a key. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Service Research the service process for the selected company. Create a service process map. Explain the elements of infrastructure for the service company using flow charts and be sure to provide a key. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Summary Provide a 750-1,000-word summary describing the differences and similarities between manufacturing and service environments. For each company, identify if customerintroduced variability is available. If not, how would you implement flexibility for customerintroduced variability? How will a deep understanding of both manufacturing and service environments help you in your future or current career? Provide an example. Prepare this assignment according to the guidelines found in the APA Style Guide, located in the Student Success Center. An abstract is not required. This assignment uses a rubric. Please review the rubric prior to beginning the assignment to become familiar with the expectations for successful completion. You are required to submit this assignment to Turnitin. Please refer to the directions in the Student Success Center. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Create a service process map. Should be a sequence of specific activities defined by the appropriate verb. As is, the process is more like a framework. Explain the elements of infrastructure for the service company using flow charts and be sure to provide a key. Cite three to five sources to support your process map. Describe the differences and similarities between manufacturing and service environments. For each company, identify if customer-introduced variability is available. If not, how would you implement flexibility for customer-introduced variability? How will a deep understanding of both manufacturing and service environments help you in your future or current career? Provide an example. Prepare this assignment according to the guidelines found in the APA Style Guide