I wrote an essay about discussing Ivory coast economy, I sent my draft to my tutor and he said I should talk more on the gdp, inflation and debt of Ivory Coast. he said I should link the history of Ivory Coast to its current economic environment

Thanks for your email. I've had a quick look and have some comments on things you might want to focus on . The essay is well-written, but should include more references. I would focus on adding more of these . For an economics you spend quite a lot of time talking about the history and politics of the Ivory coast before discussing the economics. I would potentially shorten the earlier discussion a bit, add more on the economics (maybe about GDP, inflation and debt levels), and discuss the link between the history of the Ivory coast and it's current econonomic environment