In conclusion, cell phones are a convenient addition to our daily lives. For staying in touch with loved ones, getting help, or following current events, we rely on them constantly. My grandmother still has only a land line, which is hard to believe. It would be hard to live in the modern world without a cell phone. Please answer the following questions: 1. What does my conclusion do well? 2. What needs improvement? (Does it remind readers of the thesis - see the introduction discussion - without repeating it? Does it include any new, irrelevant information? Does it use any phrases that it shouldn't? Does it give readers a sense of closure. Is it a well-developed paragraph?) 3. Based on what you seid, revise my conclusion for me. You don't have to rewrite it completely. Just fix the problems you mention. If you're stuck, look back at the strategies for writing conclusions and think about which one(s) you could incorporate