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Original Source Material

"Providing easy access to information regarding the psychological and biological effects of marijuana use to adolescents and young adults could change risk perceptions. About 30% of students entering college reported having tried marijuana at some point and 8.5% began using marijuana during their freshman year of college (Suerken et al., 2014)."

Instructions:

After reading the source material above taken from Sheffield and Grissett's article,Factors That Influence College Students' Risk Perceptions of Marijuana,and the module readings that discuss how to properly paraphrase source material and cite in APA style, write the passage above in your own words the space provided below:

Student attempt:

Suerken et al. (2014) research shows that to lower the consumption of beginning to use cannabis during the transitional stage of first-year students in higher learning, the acquiring of knowledge concerning the pros and cons of cannabis during middle and high schooling years could aid in this goal. (Sheffield & Grissett, 2018, p. 13)