me critique this article: This assignment is include: * critique the paragraph structure highlighting the use of topic sentences and supporting sentences (provide examples on why or why not why paragraph is unified and cohesive) * evaluates types of sentences uses and the impact on the reader (provide specific examples of sentences and mention type of sentences) * And the word choices (choose words and evaluate if they used correctly and effectively The article: A cloud-based phone system, or cloud phone, is a phone service that allows you to make calls over the internet rather than over a traditional analog phone line that uses copper wires or optical fibers to make a connection. Cloud phones are hosted in one or more off-site secure data centers. These phone systems can be used with a variety of devices, including traditional phones with adapters, smartphone apps, computer software or VoIP-enabled phones. Rather than maintaining software via a server, such as a private branch exchange (PBX) on the premises, all information and data are stored in the cloud. This helps you save on costly maintenance and updates since everything can be easily updated in the cloud