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WRITING WORKSHOP PRACTICE WITH STYLE Edit the following sentences to make them concise. 1. In an employment situation, effective communication is essential at work. 2. In the event that taxes are raised, expect complaints on the part of the voters 3. There were three children playing in the yard 4. It is easy to learn to ski 5. The grass was like a carpet. It covered the whole playing field. The color of the grass was blue-green. The hall outside the office was empty. The hall had dirty floors, and the walls of this corridor were covered with graffiti 6. 7. Due to the fact that Professor Wit assigned twenty-five math problems for tomorrow, I am forced to make the decision to miss this evening's lecture to be given by the vice president of the United States 8. In many cases, workers are forced to use old equipment that needs replacing due 9. The soccer league's sponsor, as a matter of fact, purchased league jerseys for the 10. The biology student spent Saturday morning reviewing his weekly textbook to the fact that there is a policy that does not permit replacement. purpose of advertisement and publicity. assignments, writing a research report, and with lab reports. 11. The career counselor advised Althea to take several math courses and that she should also register for at least one computer course. 12. Driving to Boston is as expensive as it is to take the train 13. While at a stop sign, it is important first to look both ways and then proceeding with caution is wise. 14. I was surprised by the teacher's lack of sympathy 15. Participants in the survey were asked about their changes in political affiliation