Part 1: Remind us of what your major is (give at least one complete sentence) and then be a clearly labeled Elevator Speech (section 13-3c, 13.7) based on your career objectives.

 In addition, show us two clearly labeled variations of your career objective (section 13-4c); one written in a "poor" way and one written in an "improved" way per the book. Try to closely align your Elevator Speech with the stronger career objective.

For both the Elevator Speech and improved career objective, tell us what your concerns are about potential shortcomings or why you are happy with what you have written.

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Part 2: You only have to reply to the classmate.

Evaluate the Elevator Speech and the career objectives.  Do you agree about which objective is worded better given the classmate's major and Elevator Speech?  What suggestions can you make to help your classmate in this exercise?