penalized. Turnitin checks other student reports as well as all internet sources. So please be careful Page 1 of 2 BUS 251 Business Communication FALL 2020 The e-mail below is not written as clearly or concisely as it could be. In addition, it may have problems in organization, tone, or mechanical errors. Rewrite the email so it is appropriate for the audience and their purpose. Correct mechanical errors. Finally, add a subject line. (6) To: allstudents@disciplineduniversity.com From: Director@disciplineduniversity.com Subject: it's a disgrace and just plain pathetic that y'all are always late and have poor attendance records. It's a serious problem and the university has even automated the attendance system. Students don't relaise how much effort and time and money went into automating this attendance system. You folks are ignoring the value of attendance and punctuality. If you miss out on class you do not get to learn all the material and when its time for the exams, you are the ones who will suffer. Why don't you get it? How hard it is to understand? The new and improved automated attendance system is fantastic and saves time. Be on time and don't miss classes. Cheers :D Page 2 of 2 penalized. Turnitin checks other student reports as well as all internet sources. So please be careful Page 1 of 2 BUS 251 Business Communication FALL 2020 The e-mail below is not written as clearly or concisely as it could be. In addition, it may have problems in organization, tone, or mechanical errors. Rewrite the email so it is appropriate for the audience and their purpose. Correct mechanical errors. Finally, add a subject line. (6) To: allstudents@disciplineduniversity.com From: Director@disciplineduniversity.com Subject: it's a disgrace and just plain pathetic that y'all are always late and have poor attendance records. It's a serious problem and the university has even automated the attendance system. Students don't relaise how much effort and time and money went into automating this attendance system. You folks are ignoring the value of attendance and punctuality. If you miss out on class you do not get to learn all the material and when its time for the exams, you are the ones who will suffer. Why don't you get it? How hard it is to understand? The new and improved automated attendance system is fantastic and saves time. Be on time and don't miss classes. Cheers :D Page 2 of 2