Please answer: Business Writing Practice Quiz

Please proofread the following letter, noting all corrections with proofreaders' marks in red or blue pen. Then, reformat and retype this letter. Submit this sheet with your new letter. Make sure you pay attention to the little details. Create a business letterhead, and use Canada Post rules for both addresses.

Remember$-$you are checking many things:

Proper business$-$letter format $($line$-$spacing, standard letter format, and balance on the page$)$

Positive wording $($benefit statements$)$

Customer$-$service formula

Organized $($logical order of ideas$)$

Graphic highlighting $($parallel structure for your bulleted list$)$

Spelling$/$typographical errors$/$punctuation$/$current dates $($all dates make sense$)$

Complete, accurate information

KISS principle $($e$.$g$.$ remove redundant ideas and SLANG$)$

Remember to sign your letter because YOU are the writer in this situation

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FEDERAL EXPRESS

Discover Wellness Centre

$8908-{126}^{th}$ street

Edmonton, Alberta, T$9$X $4$B$4$

Octobwer $21,2023-10-21$

Susan Smithey $19045-{99}^{th}$ Avenue

Edmonton, Alberta TOB $4$M$5$

Dear Susan Smithey;

SUBJECTThank you for your inquiry reg: our coarse offerings for the Winter sessin.

We will be hosting numerus workshops at our south side cite this year. I am enclosing a brochure for your reference. The most popular classes sell out quickly so don't wait or you may loose out. You might be particularly interested in our evening programs. They run from $7$ o'clock to $9$ o'clock during the week. Their often overbooked, so please sign up soon. We except Visa, Mastercard and American Express as well as cash. We do not take Personal checques.

I appreiciate you're interest in the Discovery Wellness Centre.

Yours Truly,

Your Name

Senior Administrative Assistant