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Please describe how you have prepared for your intended major, including your readiness to succeed in your upper-division courses once you enroll at the university.

Our childhood of commodities and assets has influenced us by financial matters in our everyday schedule. Early Elementary kids would be trading pokemon cards and any other flashy items that pleases their eyes. Our cash, work, and leadership affect our economic decisions. I was always intrigued by how our cash is used and distributed between goods and services. The supply and demand during the holiday season always fascinated me. Finance is rooted in many business functionalities and the skills you acquire while getting a degree in finance give you the capability to work in almost any function of a business. That same skill set can be used on selling almost anything but you can also value what you are selling and make crucial calculations. Therefore, your degree says finance but it fits in with accounting, marketing, management, and more because to evaluate companies you need to not only know how each function performs but ways to make it perform better. The accounting aspect presented me with a closer comprehension of my curiosity related to business. Finance has endless opportunities and is well suited to my changing interests. I decided to pursue and take the essential courses required for an Economic and Business Administration major. I took interest in occasions with guest speakers presenting their stories and personal finance workshops at my Community College. I elaborated with fellow professors on their advice and experience. Gaining a fundamental understanding of human behavior and how it relates to my major drove me to a solid foundation of hard work and different business subjects to learn from. I participated in club meetings and connected with entrepreneurs to further expand my knowledge and creative thinking .It is fundamental to have the solid establishment of different aspects of understanding the route matter of a business. Finance touches everything in the world, you can learn about all the different things in the world through finance. I'm an analytical person by nature and good with numbers, so finance was the logical science for me to study.