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Flawed Letter, with grammatical errors State Health Department 1890 Clark Road Jefferson City, MO 67220 June 6, 2016 Dale McGraw, Manager Elmwood Mobile Home Park Elmwood, Mo. 64003 Dear Mr. McGraw, On April 19, 2016, Harvey Haddix and Ryan Duran from the Health Department conducted an inspection of the Elmwood Mobile Home Park Wastewater Treatment Facility. The purpose was to assess compliance with the state's Clean Water Law, Clean Water Commission regulations, and your facility's plan for pollution control. The inspection also would allow the state to promote proper operation of Wastewater Facilities. And to provide technical assistance were needed to the Elmwood Mobile Homes management Though the Elmwood Mobile Home pollution control plan had expired in 2015, a consent judgment was issued by the state's Attorney Generals Office. The county court stipulated a timeline for correction by connection to an available sewer system. Your mobile home park's wastewater system has continually discharged to the Little Osage River. A copy of the abatement order, which requires that monthly DMR's be submitted by the 28" of the month following the reporting periods is attached. All DMR's for the previous twelve months have been received, reported pollution parameters are not within limits. Due to the plant's performance. The stream was placed on the 2014 303 (d) stream for impairment by the Elmwood Mobile Home. As part of the inspection, a review of the facility's discharge monitoring report was conducted. 24 hour composite samples were collected using a composite sampler. Attached are the results of the 24 hour composite samples collected on April 20", 2016. Every one of the problems documented is an infraction and it must be addressed. Within 30 days of receipt of this letter, please submit to the Health Department written documentation describing steps taken to correct each of the concern's identified in the attachments, also include engineering reports, and submit a time frame to eliminate the problems. Thank you for your cooperation Sincerely, Harvey Haddix Harvey Haddix Environmental Manager Flawed Letter, with grammatical errors State Health Department 1890 Clark Road Jefferson City, MO 67220 June 6, 2016 Dale McGraw, Manager Elmwood Mobile Home Park Elmwood, Mo. 64003 Dear Mr. McGraw, On April 19, 2016, Harvey Haddix and Ryan Duran from the Health Department conducted an inspection of the Elmwood Mobile Home Park Wastewater Treatment Facility. The purpose was to assess compliance with the state's Clean Water Law, Clean Water Commission regulations, and your facility's plan for pollution control. The inspection also would allow the state to promote proper operation of Wastewater Facilities. And to provide technical assistance were needed to the Elmwood Mobile Homes management Though the Elmwood Mobile Home pollution control plan had expired in 2015, a consent judgment was issued by the state's Attorney Generals Office. The county court stipulated a timeline for correction by connection to an available sewer system. Your mobile home park's wastewater system has continually discharged to the Little Osage River. A copy of the abatement order, which requires that monthly DMR's be submitted by the 28" of the month following the reporting periods is attached. All DMR's for the previous twelve months have been received, reported pollution parameters are not within limits. Due to the plant's performance. The stream was placed on the 2014 303 (d) stream for impairment by the Elmwood Mobile Home. As part of the inspection, a review of the facility's discharge monitoring report was conducted. 24 hour composite samples were collected using a composite sampler. Attached are the results of the 24 hour composite samples collected on April 20", 2016. Every one of the problems documented is an infraction and it must be addressed. Within 30 days of receipt of this letter, please submit to the Health Department written documentation describing steps taken to correct each of the concern's identified in the attachments, also include engineering reports, and submit a time frame to eliminate the problems. Thank you for your cooperation Sincerely, Harvey Haddix Harvey Haddix Environmental Manager