Provide feedback and recommend ways to extend thinking to the paragraph below.

I chose a tweet from the California Department of Corrections and Rehabilitation Twitter page. The tweet was about the successful implementation of a new program to reduce recidivism. This program encourages good behavior and awards inmates with certain privileges, such as access to programs such as job training and education(Corrections,2018). It alsoaddresses both social and criminal justice issues in corrections by providing inmates with the opportunity to learn valuable skills that can help them become successful members of society upon release.