Reflect on your revision process and complete the following:

• Share an area of your case study project that needs revision. This could be an area that you identified or that was identified by your instructor.
• Discuss how you plan to make the necessary revisions--including how you plan to improve your grammar and the flow of your essay.

Case Study

There is a close relationship between health and wealth. One of the reasons for this argument is that wealthy people have the financial resources that allow them to a healthy foods and access quality healthcare services. Various studies have shown that wealthy people are likely to have better health than the general population. In one of the recent studies, the author found that wealthy people "spend more of their own resources on gated communities, private schools, bottled water, and expensive organic food. And they give lots of money to politicians who help them maintain their status. It is stressful to construct thick walls to keep everything stressful out" (Sapolsky, 2018, p. 64).

Similarly, healthy peoples conduct their daily activities and are more productive. Health is an important indicator of good performance. Healthy workers are also more likely to be more productive compared to unhealthy employees. According to Clay (2001, par. 5), "Epidemiological studies have confirmed the relationship between income, education, and occupation on the one hand and health outcomes on the other. The decade-long Whitehall study of 17,350 British civil servants, for example, found that relative risk of death increased as rank decreased". These findings suggest that health can improve the financial status of an individual.