rephrase: Hi Kate, I really liked reading your perspective on this topic. You've touched on some important points about the influence of media on pop culture and the differences between healthcare systems. I think you did a great job highlighting key distinctions between Universal Health Care systems and the privatized American healthcare system. You did a great job explaining some flaws you noticed in the American healthcare system, such as the difficulty many face in obtaining affordable coverage, which I think underscores the need for reform and a closer look at how healthcare is delivered and financed. It's a complex issue with no easy solutions, but overall I think you did a great job writing about it