Return to week $1$ assignment and analyze your writing on Part B$.$ Identify and explain three specific opportunities for improvement.

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Question $2$ Read the email below. Now, rewrite the email utilizing best practices from this week$$s business communication learning. Include a subject line. Explain the difference between the poorly constructed email and your version.

Poor example

Hey all,

Great day today. See at our team meeting Monday. I wanted to tell everyone that we$$ve had a change in HR Policies. These are kind of important, so everyone will need to listen up$.$ There is a new policy on travel reimbursements. You can$$t just go take a trip anymore. The new policy had specific rules that must be followed OR ELSE. The rules include obtaining approval in advance for all travel. This must be obtained $30$ days prior to travelling. You also have to use corporate approved travel vendors for all travel including use of rental car agencies. You must save all travel receipts to submit with your travel report. This includes Uber receipts. And, you have to get those travel reports uploaded in the system within one week of travel. Man $$ that$$s a lot to do $$ but I know our team can make a difference and do it right. If you$$ve got some questions $$ just throw them over to me$.$ Thanks.

Joe Smith

Type your rewritten $$good$$ example of the above poor email here

Your explanation here of the difference between your rewrite and the poor example