Review the Six C$\text{'}$s NOTES Download Six C$\text{'}$s NOTES as ALL written work in this class will be edited for Six Cs$.$ For this first section of your assignment, type or copy and paste the Six C headings and $16$ sentences below AS WRITTEN, then $($under each sentence$)$ re$-$write each using the Six Cs rules to improve these sentences. Make sure you are relaying the exact message, just using the Six Cs to make a more professional statement. Add info as needed and use bold red font for your adjusted sentences.

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I don't think you will need notes to adjust these sentences for Six Cs$.$

You will need to use the notes as you adjust these sentences for Six Cs$.$

SIX Cs:

First, describe in your own words what each of the Six Cs means. $($Using Courtesy means... $)$Adjust these sentences using the Six Cs notes:

Courtesy: Using Courtesy means... Write out the description in your own words.

$1.$ I$\text{'}$m not in for client meetings on Friday afternoons as I have to pick up my kids from the babysitter.

$2.$ The Wild's Bar and Grill staff and I appreciate you for your patronage.

$3.$ We do not give cash refunds ever and do not give store credit after $30$ days of purchase and never without a receipt.

Clarity: Using Clarity means...

$4.$ To much money is beinge spended on non$-$essential items

$5.$ There are three days next week when you can leave for lunch; it was noted that Monday is not one of them.

$6.$ Jenkins tried to talk with his coach while he tried to talk on the phone with his Mom.

Conciseness: Using Conciseness means...

$7.$ With that being said, please use the approved letterhead for all business letters.

$8.$ I would like to acknowledge that I received your thank you card and I thank you for thinking of me$.$

$9.$ The honest truth was presented in his really great fantastic speech.

Concreteness: Using Concreteness means...

$10.$ I think the session will be interesting for the employees who want to learn CPR$.$

$11.$ Most of the students scored low on the midterm exam.

$12.$ That Bronco is pretty new but has lots of miles.

Correctness: Using Correctness means...

$13.$ Their planning to cut personal irregardless of the shortage of managers hear

$14.$ in his speech the director said, the VP is working to add positions in our Marketing Department to help with Social Media."

$15.$ Your duties are to schedule the meetings, should send announcements, and arranging for food.

Completeness: Using Completeness means...

$($Add info as needed to answer ALL the $$W$$ questions.$)$

$16.$ Please turn in your work asap.

Editing a Message for Six Cs:

Your supervisor, Terrie Wood, has asked you to rewrite the following draft email message as she was rushed in writing it$.$ You like your job and want to build credibility as quickly as possible so you take the time to do this message right!

Re$-$write the message below noting that the Direct Approach $($main point, explanation$/$support$,$ positive and specific close$)$ HAS been used, but the first and last paragraph are weak $($too many "I"s$,$ negative language, etc.$)$ and the middle informational section must be completed. She gave you some notes about the Direct Approach Download Direct Approach and the Six Cs Download Six Cswith examples for your use. Use your text, Pages $5,12$ & $13$ to fill in FAIR info as requested. Please make up any information you need to create a complete message. Use the EMAIL format with a clear and specific Subject Line and your Signature Block info. Write your message in Word, then submit into Assignment $1$ by due day$/$time$.$

Draft Message:

Subject Line: Happy Monday

Dear Teem:

I am writing to you to see if you would possibly review this information on building creddibility with yur clients by using the FAIR Test of Ethical Busness Communications.

Most people don't trust businesses according to Gallup, Inc., as described by Edelman experts and we don't really have that much credibility anyway as we're an new business In order to build trust through out communications, both verbal and written, is to use the FAIR Test as descibed more fully on the attached brochure. We should review all our communications with the FAIR questions:

Facts: How... $($Please fill in the description question plus the three more under each from text.$)$

Have you presented the facts correctly?

Access

Impacts

Respect

Next Friday at our Play Hard Friday Meeting, we well practice using the FAIR Test as we roleplay client interactions. Please join me at$...($tell em when and where and if food$/$beer will be provided, etc.$)$

You all are the reason we are growing so quickly! You've woked especially hard this past month and we've grown our sales from September by $12\%$ which is quite remarkable when we look at last year's October slump. I want to thank you for reading this. I and the company appreciate your hard work. Please contact me with any concern.

Terrie L$.$ Wood Put your full signature block here as we'll send this messa