Revise these sentences to improve you-attitude. Eliminate any awkward phrasing. In some cases, you may need to add information to revise the sentence effectively.

We are please to offer you the ability to sign up for dental coverage in the cloud.

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You will be happy to know that you have unlimited texting anywhere in your province.

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After hours of hard work, I have negotiated a new employee benefit for you.

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I urge you to attend a meeting about the new benefits package so that we can inform you about your rights and responsibilities.

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You will be happy to learn that additional cards for your spouse or child are free.

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We have added another employee benefit for you.

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Today we shipped the book you ordered.

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In your report you forgot to tell how many people you surveyed.

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I hope that it is obvious to you that we want to give you the very best prices on furniture.

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You didnt order enough doughnuts for the meeting.

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You-Attitude Practice Sheet

Revise the following email to improve the you-attitude.

It has come to my attention that there are visitors to the company that are showing themselves to offices. Said practice should not continue.

There should be no unescorted visitors walking through the offices. We must insist that you ensure that all the visitors check in with either the 8th floor receptionist or the 9th floor receptionist. The receptionist will contact the employee that the visitor is here to see, and the employee will have to go to the reception area to escort the visitor.

It is asked that you instruct any visitors that you are expecting to check in with the receptionist, and that you escort your visitor back to your work area from the receptionist area once you are called. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to call me.

Thanks in advance for your cooperation.

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