Revising Editing Proofreading Revising Business Messages Project Description: In Chapter 6 we learned how to revise business messages. For this assignment, you will practice revising business messages and reflect on your own revision habits. 1) in your book, go to pp. 208 209 and complete exercise 6.11 "Document for Analysis: Wretched E-Mail invitation." Reduce the 15-sentence message to 6 efficient sentences with a list of Schedules. Make sure that your new message still conveys all required information for an invitation. 2) In one paragraph, reflect on your revising style and writing habits. Answer the following 4 questions: When you are writing, do you quickly write and then revise after, or do you prefer to write and revise as you go? What are advantages for your writing style? What are disadvantages for your writing style? Do you use the same method for both short and long messages? Submit your revision for exercise 6.11 and your reflection paragraph to Project 6 in Moodle SAMSUNG Department Managers List Aaron Alexander From: Aaron Ale Subject: Upcoming Interviews For some time our ma ne time our management team has been thinking + hiring several interns. We decided to offer compen- to the interns in our internship program because two fields (computer science and information systems) interns are usually paid, which is the norm. However, you may be disappointed to learn that we can offer only three internships. In working with our nearby state university, we have narrowed the field to six excellent candidates. These six candidates will be interviewed. This is to inform you that you are invited to attend three interviewing sessions for these student candidates. Your presence is required at these sessions to help us avoid making poor selections. Mark your calendars for the following three times. The first meeting is May 3 in the conference room. The second meet- ing is May 5 in Office 22 (the conference room was sched- uled). On May 9 we can finish up in the conference room. All of the meetings will start at 2 p.m. In view of the fact that your projects need fresh ideas and talented new team nembers, I should not have to urge you to attend and be well prepared. ease examine all the candidates' rsums at the company wiki and send me your ranking lists. Aaron Alexander [Full contact information] ml Emnloyee Revising Editing Proofreading Revising Business Messages Project Description: In Chapter 6 we learned how to revise business messages. For this assignment, you will practice revising business messages and reflect on your own revision habits. 1) in your book, go to pp. 208 209 and complete exercise 6.11 "Document for Analysis: Wretched E-Mail invitation." Reduce the 15-sentence message to 6 efficient sentences with a list of Schedules. Make sure that your new message still conveys all required information for an invitation. 2) In one paragraph, reflect on your revising style and writing habits. Answer the following 4 questions: When you are writing, do you quickly write and then revise after, or do you prefer to write and revise as you go? What are advantages for your writing style? What are disadvantages for your writing style? Do you use the same method for both short and long messages? Submit your revision for exercise 6.11 and your reflection paragraph to Project 6 in Moodle SAMSUNG Department Managers List Aaron Alexander From: Aaron Ale Subject: Upcoming Interviews For some time our ma ne time our management team has been thinking + hiring several interns. We decided to offer compen- to the interns in our internship program because two fields (computer science and information systems) interns are usually paid, which is the norm. However, you may be disappointed to learn that we can offer only three internships. In working with our nearby state university, we have narrowed the field to six excellent candidates. These six candidates will be interviewed. This is to inform you that you are invited to attend three interviewing sessions for these student candidates. Your presence is required at these sessions to help us avoid making poor selections. Mark your calendars for the following three times. The first meeting is May 3 in the conference room. The second meet- ing is May 5 in Office 22 (the conference room was sched- uled). On May 9 we can finish up in the conference room. All of the meetings will start at 2 p.m. In view of the fact that your projects need fresh ideas and talented new team nembers, I should not have to urge you to attend and be well prepared. ease examine all the candidates' rsums at the company wiki and send me your ranking lists. Aaron Alexander [Full contact information] ml Emnloyee