Rewrite the following paragraph by using the features of academic writing. It's a real shame that something as simple as a diet was not taken into account by nurses, thus causing unnecessary pain to the patient. It probably caused even more pain to the patient's family and friends having to see their loved one die like that. How would we feel if we saw our own relative go through that experience?

Rewrite the following paragraph by using the features of academic writing. It's a real shame that something as simple as a diet was not taken into account by nurses, thus causing unnecessary pain to the patient. It probably caused even more pain to the patient's family and friends having to see their loved one die like that. How would we feel if we saw our own relative go through that experience