seeking assistance writing statement or narrative to read in court before judge asking for probation. Below is what I have wrote so far but I want it sounds persuasive and success.

I want to thank you united state was land enough to adopt me. I have passion of helping people and I no longer do what I was doing now I have job and I am working helping people who need assistance. I want to move forward with creating new record or life. And I still want to continue helping my young siblings and sick mom. I want work on paying restitution. I hope you can find in your heart to give me probation.