styie Consiberations

txamples

Avoid unnucessary words in phirachs.

soying lenjored whico we were together ratrer than blelt peat during the time that we were together

Avoid urnecessary quaiplirs.

$37$yng rour ouspos al procedue tonforms with fedvel standays racher than our diswosar firoce dure is in cantoritity with "tueral seamiardi"

Use acrive vertis iestead of linking verbs.

sanig ithoughtyou were comive rather chank fins whder the imbifesion thit you merecompe"

Awois there is$.$ cheve are. and it is constructions

shang Tas not wiet tu go to thax saniletence'$/$ ather ti an there is nin redson cimil pate tiocioriererice

Plate action in werbs

frode unnecrssary pitepestions. than $7$ait norinterested at ins prevent litre: