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GE 1110 Purposive Communication SY 2122, Second SemesteriPeriod B FINAL PROJECT ADVOCACY SCRIPT NOTE Before you proceed, it is imperative that you have read the instructions and understood the guidelines presented in Module 10. Rememberthat the speech must have 400-500 words. Ensure that the entire speech will reflect a cohesive advocacy message. UN SDG NAME OF THE ORGANIZATION MEMBERS Gender Equality GERC Inc. Jazmyne Chua, Lucanus Latorre, Yzabel Ablan CONTENT INTRODUCTION OF THE ORGANIZATION ) Open with an engaging statement. -) Introduce yourself, your position, the organization, and if possible, its history. -) State the advocacy of your organization, BACKGROUND ON THE SOCIAL ISSUE -) Define the specific social issue by relating this to the chosen UN SDG. -) Identify the factors that contribute to its widespread popularity of being urgent or controversial. ASSIGN ED MEM BER Lucas Lucas ADVOCACY SC RI PT Gender inequality has long plagued our society; we can find bias and discrimination in the professional work environment, schools, and even our homes. Good day everyone, and thank you for coming! Before I begin, let me introduce myself, I am ____, the Executive Director of Gender Equality Resource Center Inc., Here at GERC Inc,, we have one goal, which is to promote gender equality for development in and through cooperatives, Having said that, we wanted to address gender inequality in the gaming industry specifically. This can pertain to casual gamers, streamers, and even professional players worldwide. However, discrimination is more pronounced for female gamers who, according to research, suffer from sexual harassment and verbal abuse daily. Although many factors contribute to said discrimination, the main factor contributing to this toxic environment is the perception that gaming is a masculine activity and that women are unskilled gamers, Page 1 of 3 GE 1110 Purpqsive Communication SY 2122, Second SemesteriPerlod B CONTENT ASSIGNED MEMBER ADVOCACY SCRIPT DESCRIPTION OF THE STAKEHOLDERS Jazmvne With that said, the people that will be affected by this discrimination are all female 9 Describe the people that will be affected gamers of different ages, genders, sexualities, races, and nationalities worldwide. We by the issue. Include their geographical focus on the gaming industry as a whole, tackling every stakeholder one at a time. location, age, race, etc. STANCE OF THE ORGANIZATION Jazmyne The organization strongly supports promoting equal rights and opportunities for everyone 9 Identify the position of the organization affected by gender inequality, which aligns with our beliefs and goals. Gender equality is a on the social issue. right and necessary foundation to appreciate every person's skills, have fair treatment and 9 Fortify your stand by providing facts, have a peaceful and progressive world. Over a hundred gamers alleged they were sexually evidence, statistical data, or examples. assaulted, harassed, or discriminated against. Some even disguise their genders to 9 Explain the importance of bringing this prevent themselves from getting harrassed. Likewise, there are members of our issue into the consciousness or awareness organization who are gamers too. Although there are times that they receive positive of the society and your stakeholders. compliments from their teammates, they have also encountered men who tend to be judgemental and critique them because they don't play as well as \"guys." It is critical to shed more light on this since there are many sexist individuals, and the number of gamers is growing every day. CALL FOR ACTION Yzabel In line with this, GERC Inc. will develop a project that will include webinars and workshops 9 [Option #1] Promote a specific project open to all types of gamers that may boost confidence, prevent discrimination, and allow that would benefit your affected gamers to have a better and safer community. Additionally, we will also hold a variety of stakeholders. Describe the project, gaming tournaments to showcase equality and unity among all male and female gamers. 9 [Option #2] Propose a solution or suggest This helps show that female gamers can also participate, compete, and excel in the a concrete action that the audience can gaming industry. do to change the situation. CONCLUSION Yzabel With the goal to encourage a more robust and safer community, our organization shall help prevent discrimination, promote equality, and maintain a healthy environment among gamers of all genders. Starting by challenging the common gender stereotypes and Page 2 of 3 GE 111-0 Purposive Communication SY 2122, Second Semester-Period B CONTENT ASSIGNED MEMBER ADVOCACY SCRIPT -> Conclude the speech with parting discrimination faced in the gaming industry. So join us in this battle against gender thoughts that you would like to leave with stereotypes against gamers, and help us make a difference. Although you may only be the audience. one, you too can change the outcome. > Connect your beliefs to the values of the audience. REFERENCES (at least three references, in APA format, 7th edition) Alexandra A. (2021, September 1). Column: The sexist culture of gaming. https://theithacan.org/columns/column-the-sexist-culture-of-gaming/#:~:text=Video%20games%20have%20long%20been,that%20are%20popular%20among%20wom en Kuss, D., Kristensen, A., Williams, J., Lopez-Fernando, O., (2022, January 21). To Be or Not to Be a Female Gamer: A Qualitative Exploration of Female Gamer Identity. https://www.ncbi.nim.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8835226/. Noll, M. (2021, May 17). Facing Death Threats and Police Checks, Women and Nonbinary Gamers Are Left to Protect Themselves. HelloGiggles. https://hellogiggles.com/lifestyle/technology/gaming-internet-culture/female-gamers-gaming-industry-harassment/. Puyat, M. (2021, Nov 12). Female gamers on the joys and challenges of video game streaming. CNN Philippines. https://www.cnnphilippines.com/life/culture/tech/2021/11/12/female-gamers-joys-and-challenges-of-streaming.html. n.n. (n.d.). Gender Equality. United Nations. https://www.un.org/sustainabledevelopment/gender-equality/. Page 3 of 3CALL FOR ACTION . kuk Reiterate acess for filipinos Choose ONE method of addressing the In line with this, Heroes Against Hunger Inc. will develop a project to provide support to local agriculture social issue: through the help of our stakeholders: Walang Iwanan Alliance and Busog Pilipinas. Our solution is Food waste a. Promote a specific project that would reduction would be a significant step forward, and everyone can help by reducing their own food waste to some Lyle Chavez benefit your affected stakeholders. extent. Our goal is the " Green tag to feed, food first program" where items in the grocery stores will have green 2:25 PM Yesterday Describe the project. tags on them, and a certain amount of the item will go through our organization to build capital to feed the people of Bangkal, Makati City, Metro Manila. What is the objective with collaborating with these organizations Lyle Chavez 2:26 PM Yesterday A suggestion regarding the call for action: establish that HAHI is going to collaborate with two existing organizations. Reply or add others with @ GE 111-0 Purposive Communication - Sections 1 and 2 SY 2223, First Semester Viewers of this file can see comments and suggestions. Agreed OK CONTENT MEMBER-IN-CHARGE | ADVOCACY SCRIPTSTANCE OF THE ORGANIZATION Identify the position of the organization kuk Heroes Against Hunger is a major advocate of year-round access to healthy, sufficient food. And all forms of on the social issue. malnutrition. significant increase in agricultural productivity. Zero hunger is to eradicate hunger from the globe by Fortify your stand by providing facts, the year 2030. Finding solutions that are effective for this issue is tough due to the high rate and persistent evidence, statistical data, or examples. poverty. Explain the importance of bringing this issue into the consciousness or awareness Lyle Chavez ... of the society and your stakeholders. 2:20 PM Yesterday CALL FOR ACTION kuk Explain why it matters Choose ONE method of addressing the In time with this, Heroes Against Hunger Inc. will develop a project to provide support to local agriculture social issue: through the help of our stakeholders: Walang Iwarran Alliance and Busog Pilipinas. Our solution is Food waste a. Promote a specific project that would reduction would be a significant step forward, and everyone can help by reducing their own food waste to some Reply or add others with @ benefit your affected stakeholders. extent. Our goal is the "Green tag to feed food first program" where items in the grocery stores will have green Viewers of this file can see comments and suggestions. 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