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TO: All Employees

FROM: George Holmes

DATE: October 19, 2015

RE: Travel

Every company has its policies regarding travel and vouchers. Ours strike me as important and fairly straightforward. Yet for the life of me I cannot fathom why they are being ignored. It is in everyone's best Interest. When you travel, you are on company time, company business. Respect that , won't you. Explain your purpose, keep your receipts, document your visits, keep track of meals. Do the math .

If you see more than one per day, it should not be too hard or too much to ask you to keep a log of each, separate , individual visitAfter all, our business does depend on these peopleand we will never know your true contributions on company trips unless you inform us (pleasel) of whom you see, where, why, and how much it costs you. That way we can keep our books straight and know that everything is going according to company policy