Use this forum post to:

1) Introduce yourself. You must include: name; family info; extra-curricular activities, hobbies or interests; educational goals; and career goals.

2) Provide an example of lousy legal writing

Post an excerpt of it - at least a few sentences - and provide a link to the source. If you are drawing from a hard copy, for which there is no link, attach a photocopy of the page or two from which you pulled the language you used for your forum post.

Provide a meaningful explanation as to why the writing is lousy.

Show how you might correct some aspect of it, even if you are merely substituting a better sentence, phrase, or just a better word, in an appropriate place. Your correction need not be extensive - just one minor but effective revision will suffice.

Name: Nida

Family info: Pakistani and Muslim

Educational goals: graduate with legal studies

career goals: become a pilot

hobies and interests: driving, movies, tiktok, food, cooking, music and sleeping

co-ciriicular activities: Captain of my cricket team and learning tennis.