we now know the Do's and Don'ts of replying to the statement "Tell me about yourself". In the same way that I have analyzed your prior responses, I want you to provide a critique for "Kim". Read her response and explain (in writing) what she should keep and what she should change or get rid of (make sure you explain to her why she should change or get rid of a statement). Interviewer: Hi Karen, you're right on time. I appreciate you coming out today. I've gone over your application and everything looks good. Before we get started, why don't you tell me about yourself. Response: "Thanks for having me, so first of all my name is Karen and I'm originally from Pakistan, but now I live in Sugar Land. I live with my mom, my dad, and three siblings: I go to Austin high school and I'm in the 11th grade. I am on the soccer team and student council. I can be shy at times until you get to know me. I'm hardworking and I don't give anyone trouble, unless they give me trouble." W of Use