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1. Newton's First Law of Motion is, "an object rest remains at rest, an an object in motion remains in motion at constant speed and in a straight line unless acted on by an unbalanced force." Being in a car that suddenly becomes in motion is a good example for this law. I was sitting in the backseat of the car, which meant that I was at rest. Suddenly, my dad pushed on the gas and my whole body flew back against the seat. Since I was at rest and the car suddenly became in motion, it was an unbalanced force that acted upon an object that was at rest, which caused me to fly back into the seat.

2. Newton's First Law of Motion states that an object rest remains at rest, and an object in motion remains at constant speed in a straight line unless forces are acted on. An example from my life is bowling. When you throw/toss the bowling ball forward on the lane, the ball continues to move forward in a straight line. The ball will change its motion when the unbalanced force is added on when it hits the gutters (bumpers on the sides) or bowling pins. This example demonstrates Newton's First Law of Motion, as the bowling ball stays in uniform motion unless forces are added on.