Write a one

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paragraph description of your favorite place. Help the reader smell, see, and feel your space by using descriptive adjectives and adverbs. Because the event occurred in the past, please use past

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tense verbs. For example, if you include dialogue, you will say things like,

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She stated

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He answered.

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tense verbs.

Write in

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st person.

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Read your paragraph out loud to yourself or someone else. Mark the parts that might confuse the reader so you can revise and edit your work.

Implement revisions and rewrite the description of your favorite place.

Correct the problems you find with:

Word choice

Sentence structure

Grammar

Punctuation

Spelling

Organization: structure of the descriptive paragraph

Submit both the before and after paragraph.