Writing Improvement Exercises

Audience Benefits and the "You" View $($L$\mathrm{.}0\mathrm{.}4)$

YOUR TASK. Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the "You" Tiew.

$16.$ We are taking the proactive step of issuing all our customers new chip$-$enabled credit cards to replace expired or lost cards and prevent increasingly costly payouts we have suffered from fraud.

$17.$ We take great pride in announcing our new schedule of low$-$cost$,$ any$-$day flights to Hawaii.

$18.$ Our strict safety policy forbids us from renting power equipment to anyone who cannor demonstrate proficiency in is use.

$19.$ We're requesting that all employees complete the attached online survey by Aprit iso that we may develop a master schedule for summer vacations more efficiently.

$20.$ Our social media engineers are excited to announce a new free app called fan Boosters that we believe will get fans to share, like, and subscribe to your content.

$21.$ To save the expense of having team trainers set up your training classes in our limited office space, we suggest offering a customized class for your employees right in your own building.