You work for a letterpress stationery company that has recently started selling merchandise through its website. To increase online sales, the owner has written an e$-$mail sales message to send out to all the company's customers on the e$-$mailing list. The owner asks you to review the following opening of her message. Our rich colored paper and timeless letterpress designs are sure to make our new promotion a success. You can purchase today for $20$ percent off What revision should you suggest? Our rich colored paper and timeless letterpress designs are $20$ percent off. Make someone happy: send a handwritten note. Make yourself happy: save $20$ percent on all our stationery online today! Picture your loved ones opening your notes written on our rich colored paper with timeless letterpress designs Picture the simple joy on their faces just knowing you care.