Read the following memorandum and identify the style, tone, grammar, and information errors.

To: Rosie Canwell From: Lynn Wong Subject: Graduate Application Date:

We have gotten around to reviewing your application for graduate study at the university.

Competition for places was fierce this year, there were large numbers of applicants, but you have been lucky and have been given a place.

Part of the package we offer is a standard assistant lecturer role; you will be working for 15 hours per week. This means you will not have pay tuition fees as this is covered by your work. In year two, you might get the same offer, but this depends on your progress.

To give you a better idea of what’s involved, I’ve attached a copy of the course documentation to print out and read. This covers pretty much everything, but it does need a bit of editing here and there.

You need to get back to me asap because there are other good students on stand-by for a place and I wouldn’t want you delaying them the chance to take your place if you don’t want it.

Regards Lynn Course Coordinator