Keep related words together. Revise the following sentences to show a clear relationship between the modifiers and the words they modify.

a. Emilio’s CAT scan was read by a radiologist in India because he could send it during evening hours.

b. The software needs upgrading for our office because it is old.

c. The fax machine needed repair which was purchased last year.

d. Postal mail is losing customers to e-mail because it is slower.

e. The newspapers fell through the bars because they were wet.